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today many
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today, many
vernacular languages are
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on
the verge of extinction due to few speakers.It is often argued that government investment would be essential
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this
issue.
However
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some consider it is not necessary to spend
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funds
for dyeing language.In my opinion
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I consider spending money on dyeing languages is unnecessary and
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can be used for more pressing issues. On the one hand
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supporters of near extinct languages say that it is part of our culture and heritage of any society when a language dies the h;
therefore
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the government
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preferring
to save the before extinct
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to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
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, more language study centre for new
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learners and
funding for doing research
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and carry out more activities related
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Globalization
  • Language extinction
  • Multilingualism
  • Revitalization
  • Government intervention
  • Policy implementation
  • Preservation
  • Endangered languages
  • Language proficiency
  • Socio-linguistic
  • Digital archives
  • Lexicon
  • Orthography
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