Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks, others say they should accept people with all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

University education is considered to be prestigious for most of the people. Getting into it, is
an
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a
difficult task and purely depend on the merit, people
possed
arranged for pictorial purposes
posed
passed
possessed
with. Some say to have young with high grades and other want to be no
age
consideration. Let's discuss
advantages
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the advantages
and disadvantages of both, in the latter part. Coming to the
Age
limit.
Firstly
, For the employment,
this
qualification is important. So the youth should be given an opportunity, those who score high marks in their academics.
For example
, Someone those who qualified with university degree will have better
opportunty
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
to get
good job
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a good job
good jobs
.
Secondly
, it will be useful for
research program
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the research program
research programs
.
For instance
, those who has completed their masters in reputed institutions, can have better options for their
further
research activities. On the
othe
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
hand, accepting all ages, with less grades, will impact the carrier of another resource who has
better education background
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a better education background
.
For example
, if person with twenty one
age
and seventy percent of marks should be given a chance,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
with
fourty
age
and sixty percent.
Moreover
, elder people, will not be able to contribute to the society, even they are educated from university school.
For instance
, someone at the
age
of fifty five, get qualified by fifty nine and hardly contribute his talent to the society for five years, unlikely twenty
four
appropriate to; intended for
for
one, who can serve for thirty five years. In conclusion, to my opinion, the
younsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
must be given
an
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a
chance
first
. They not only serve for the nation, but
also
inspires
few
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little
more towards education.
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  • academic excellence
  • limited spots and resources
  • smoother transition
  • higher education
  • high academic achievers
  • research and academic community
  • inclusive and equitable
  • lifelong learning
  • diverse perspectives
  • enrich classroom discussions
  • university culture
  • potential for success
  • contribution to society
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