Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks, others say they should accept people with all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
University education is considered to be prestigious for most of the people. Getting into it, is
an
difficult task and purely depend on the merit, people Suggestion
a
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with. Some say to have young with high grades and other want to be no arranged for pictorial purposes
posed
passed
possessed
age
consideration. Let's discuss advantages
and disadvantages of both, in the latter part.
Coming to the Suggestion
the advantages
Age
limit. Firstly
, For the employment, this
qualification is important. So the youth should be given an opportunity, those who score high marks in their academics. For example
, Someone those who qualified with university degree will have better opportunty
to get a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
good job
. Suggestion
a good job
good jobs
Secondly
, it will be useful for research program
. Suggestion
the research program
research programs
For instance
, those who has completed their masters in reputed institutions, can have better options for their further
research activities.
On the othe
hand, accepting all ages, with less grades, will impact the carrier of another resource who has not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
better education background
. Suggestion
a better education background
For example
, if person with twenty one age
and seventy percent of marks should be given a chance, than
with subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
fourty
age
and sixty percent. Moreover
, elder people, will not be able to contribute to the society, even they are educated from university school. For instance
, someone at the age
of fifty five, get qualified by fifty nine and hardly contribute his talent to the society for five years, unlikely twenty four
one, who can serve for thirty five years.
In conclusion, to my opinion, the appropriate to; intended for
for
younsters
must be given a young person of either sex
youngsters
an
chance Suggestion
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first
. They not only serve for the nation, but also
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more towards education.Suggestion
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