In many places, new homes are needed , but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In most of the locations, building
new home
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a new home
new homes
is necessary due to rise in
population which
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population, which
migrated from different parts of the country.
However
, the only area available to construct and
accomodate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
people is in the
countryside
. Part of the people say that, we need to safeguard
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
by not adding additional buildings. In my opinion, I agree that we need to limit the number of homes added to the
countryside
. At
first
, the primary reason new homes are coming up in the rural areas is due to the saturation of
housing industry
Suggestion
the housing industry
in the urban areas. Corporate and government offices
has attracted
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have attracted
a
humonguous
(used informally) very large
humungous
amount of people to the
city
.
This
caused every piece of land to have buildings and the price of each of these homes is at all time high. It is nearly impossible for anyone in the
city
to buy new homes.
This
is the paramount reason for the rise of new homes in the
country side
rural regions
countryside
.
For instance
, you can consider the example of
chennai
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Chennai
China
city
. Tall buildings and
sky-rocketing
propels bright light high in the sky, or used to propel a lifesaving line or harpoon
skyrocketing
prices of
apartments
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the apartments
has made everyone to search for homes outside the
city
or in the urban side. Thanks to the metro connectivity, many started staying in the urban side and travel to the
city
everyday
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every day
.
Besides
that, it is critical to protect the rural areas, considering the age old architecture of the buildings, traditional homes and the green landscape of the region.
Countryside
Suggestion
The countryside
has a unique
identity
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identity, such
such
as less
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
polluting
, green grass
spead
distribute or disperse widely
spread
across the area, ample supply of water, limited traffic and age old buildings from the early 1900s. The government and the local bodies should regulate any new buildings constructed in rural areas to protect the environment. They would need to foster development and at the same time, the beauty of the region should be maintained. In my opinion, there is a colossal difference when compared to rural and urban areas. More crowd
prefer
Suggestion
prefers
to migrate to rural areas, due to the natural feel and the calm environment available to lead a peaceful life. If we do not place process on new buildings,
then
the traditional feel of rural areas will be lost. In conclusion, we need to regulate new buildings in the
countryside
to save our culture and tradition in rural areas.
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