Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
day and age, where people hardly get
time
to spend with
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
loved ones, it is of utmost importance to get some quality
time
once in a while.
This
not only helps to rejuvenate but
also
for focus at work. The monotonous routine at job for many becomes a problem for the personal growth. Quality leisure
time
with whatever interests an individual is of paramount importance. Many prefer watching sports, movies, going
outdoor
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outdoors
for trekking, cooking or simply by spending
time
with loved ones. Watching movies or shows at home becomes a major part of leisure
forany
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for any
who cannot go out because of some reason or simply because they prefer to stay at home. While some shows/movies are life changing with inspirational themes, many other are addictive or depressing. Spending too much
time
watching TV can lead to lethargy, physical ailments and psychological implications. To conclude, it is not bad to watch movies
in
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at
lesiure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
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time but
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time, but
too much of it can have its own bad outcomes.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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