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Some people aim to achieve balance between their work and other part of lives, but few achieve it. What is the reason behind this? What are the solutions to tackle this problem?

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Few
Suggestion
Fewer
 masses try to achieve a
balance
 between their
work
 and their personal lives.But not all of them are unable to achieve a
balance
 between
work
 and
life
.In my opinion the
work
 load of people
make
Suggestion
makes
 them unable to get a
balance
 between their
job
 and their
life
. I think due to the pressure of
job
 and need of concentration of giving much
time
 to their
job
 making the person unable to achieve the
balance
 between
work
 and their
life
.The people need to give most of their
time
 during the whole one day making them unavailable for their family
time
this
 causes they spend less
time
 with their
love
Suggestion
loved
onces
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
ones
 so they are not able to create a
balance
 between
work
 and personal
life
.There is no doubt globalisation and technology brought a great impact on our lives in many good
ways but
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ways, but
this
also
 gives stress to the people to
work
 hard and
their
in or at that place
there
 by creating some problems in their family
life
. The solution for
this
 problem is always
upto
Suggestion
up to
 the individual and
also
 it depends on the company the person is doing the
job
.
First
 of all it is the individual responsibility to maintain a
balance
 between family and
work
.They must create a
time
 table of a day to give the priority.
Secondly
 the company
need
Suggestion
needs
 to give holidays for the employees to relax and spend quality
time
 with their
love
Suggestion
loved
 ones. To
conclude I
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conclude, I
 must say
this
 is a serious problem that any employee faces in today's world.
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
 by taking some measures by the employees and the organization the person
work
this
 problem can be slowed down.
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