Why do students prefer doing part time jobs during their studies? Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

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Combining
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with schooling is a controversial issue among people. Some
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engage with part-time jobs due to financial constraints.
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, I believe that distraction from academic
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and lack of parental control far outweigh any disadvantages.
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with, some students might decide to take a part-time job due to financial hardship. Scholars from poor family background may find it difficult to meet up with tuition fee and
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the need to take up a
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so as to be financially buoyant to pay
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fee and meet some basic needs.
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, it was discovered that most students drop out of
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in Nigeria because they were not employed by any employer. It is beneficial for students from poor background to seek for job opportunity so as to meet up with
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demands.
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, there are some disadvantages
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of
combining schooling with
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.
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, students are easily distracted
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of
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. Some students might find it quite difficult to combine pressure at
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with challenges at
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.
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, leading to a poor grade at
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.
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, improper management of time by the students might
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lead to poor performance at
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.
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, attending
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and working at the same time prevent proper parental control. It might be very difficult for parents to guide and control the student since they have two major activities that take their time. Occasionally, some parents might not know the movement of their children
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leading to lack of adequate monitoring.
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, a
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parent
might not know if the student is at
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or in
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.
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act
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gives
the children too much freedom. In conclusion,
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some student gets engaged with part-time job in order to fend for their
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and themselves,
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it distracts their concentration and make them lack parental guidance. It is on
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basis that I think that there are more disadvantages to advantages when students engage in part-time
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.

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