There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

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In recent times, there has been a move towards having small family
unit
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as opposed to
large family
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a large family
large families
. The exigencies of the modern times
has made
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have made
it so given that small family is easier to run and maintain and its cost effective
however
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it has its drawbacks. A typical small families consist of a mother, father and a 
child
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or two children.
This
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small size of
family
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a family
is beneficial because its easy to run and maintain. The cost of school fees, feeding and taking
care
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of the basic necessities of a
child
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has greatly increased in recent times. Small family
therefore
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becomes desirable as the parents can easily train their
child
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to any educational level thereby giving them
quality education
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a quality education
and can
also
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afford to provide quality lifestyle for their
child
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.
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the government will benefit from the small
unit
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of
family
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the family
as the
child
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support the government provides for each
child
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will be less and the social amenities will not be over stretched. 
On the other hand
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, while small family
unit
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is attractive, it can have
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
negative impact on the population of a country as the population will decrease in the long run.
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increase in small family
unit
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will lead to less workforce and labour.  As the parents
gets
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get
older, the younger population may not be enough to fill in the vacancies and labour requirements left by the older generation and
this
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in turn will affect the economy of the country negatively.
Furthermore
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, the life of a
child
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is not guaranteed and if
peradventure
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a parent loses their only
child
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,
this
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can be traumatic and will render the parents childless and if 
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child
Suggestion
the child
grows and decides not to take
care
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of his/her parents,
this
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can
also
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send the parents to an early
grave especially
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grave, especially
in our African setting where there are no facilities to take
care
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of old people and parents rely on their children to take
care
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of them.  In conclusion, though a small sized family is desirable, it can lead to low
work force
the force of workers available
workforce
in the long
run which
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run, which
will affect the economy and the parents stands a greater risk of being childless if they lose their only
child
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.
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