Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums play a vital role in making our heritage safe, because they contain the identity of the country over
ages
Suggestion
the ages
. Nowadays, a lot of museums take a charge for entering. In my opinion,
this
action has lots of merits and it overcomes demerits. All advantages and
diadvantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
will be discussed in the lines below.
on
Suggestion
On
one hand, one of the most important merits of charging is that part of those
money
are used
Suggestion
is used
to develop the
builing
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
and to make it clean and safe while another part of it goes for discovering and searching for new monuments.
buildings
Suggestion
Buildings
of museums need to be clean and ready for visitors from different countries.
For example
, in Egypt, there are myriads of monuments and museums and the ministry of tourism needs to cover the costs of
constucting
make by combining materials and parts
constructing
new museums and the budget of discovering new monuments because as know, they are underground and need need
money
for extraction.
Hence
, if the government does not gather
money
from visitor, it will cause
economical problem
Suggestion
an economical problem
.
On the other hand
, one of the worst demerits of
this
rule is that some museums tickets are
costy
entailing great loss or sacrifice
costly
cosy
crusty
and tourists pay a lot of
money
. It is a legal right for any human being to know about his heritage.
for
Suggestion
For
instance, in some countries, tourists from
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
countries pay more than citizens to visit these places.
it
Suggestion
It
makes unequality
whitch
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
can limit the rate of tourists who visit museums every year. There is a survey published by Al-Ahram shows that 40% of tourists do not plan to visit new places because of the cost.
Therefore
, governments have to make tickets cheaper. In conclusion, after
this
essay has manifested the advantages and disadvantages, it can be reiterated that merits
getover
Suggestion
get over
demirts
an outcome (good or bad) that is well deserved
deserts
democrats
and our heritage deserves more than that.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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