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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Kaine, I am a student of
Microsoft
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the Microsoft
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Office
 Training (MST20)
course
 in your institution. I am writing
this
 letter to let you know that I would not be able to attend classes
on
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from
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 20th June onwards. I am hoping that you would allow me to continue the
course
 with the
next
 intake from October 2019. I work with a telecom company as an assistant researcher and due to some recently assigned projects, my
office
 demands more of my time.
Besides
, I have some strict deadlines ahead and to meet them, I will need to work a few extra hours each day.
Also
, I will travel to Australia at the beginning of July for some official tasks. All these new responsibilities in
office
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 force me to pause my
course
 for the time being.
However
, I am willing to complete my
course
 as it would be highly beneficial for my career.
Therefore
 I humbly request you to allow me to attend the
next
 available batch.
This
 would be helpful for me to manage my
office
 work on the one hand and continue my
course
on the other hand
. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Namrata Jain
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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