Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But other say film should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Modern world today
,
Accept space
,
watching cinema is
quite
Suggestion
Quite
normal
.
Accept space
.
Although
it is sometimes thought that film is a great source of
entertainment
,
Accept space
,
other people think that
this
can be served the purpose of education.In my opinion
,
Accept space
,
I consider films are both educative and informative. On the one hand
,
Accept space
,
some consider film industry is purely meant for
entertainment
purposes.
In other words
,
Accept space
,
Cinemas which have the elements of fun
such
as music
,
Accept space
,
stories
,
Accept space
,
visual treat
,
Accept space
,
dance and comedy and these factors contributing high standards
ofenjoyment
Suggestion
of enjoyment
.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
viewers can unwind themselves when they
exhousted
drained of energy or effectiveness; extremely tired; completely exhausted
exhausted
after a hectic schedule or escape from
boring day
Suggestion
the boring day
to day life.
Thus
,
Accept space
,
the majority of critics label films as
a
Suggestion
an
entertainment
media
Suggestion
medium
.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
some believe that big screen can be educative for its audience.To illustrate
,
Accept space
,
sci-fi films depict complicated science formula which is simplified
into
Suggestion
in
laymen
Suggestion
layman's
laymen's
terms which definitely give insight into how science
revaluationised
change radically
revolutionized
our society
.
Accept space
.
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
people who interested in learning of history, geography and various
concept
Suggestion
concepts
also
possible;
therefore
, Cinema is a medium
that is
entirely dedicated
for
Suggestion
to
education,
Finally
,
Accept space
,
I wonder
,
Accept space
,
many films are created in a way to entertain society as well as provide information on something
relevent
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
irrelevant
to the society
,
Accept space
,
the combination of both.Rarely does cinema only for entertainments
instead
they
also be
Suggestion
also are
are also being
full of information. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
While people are divided into two as some argue that the film is for
entertainment
,
Accept space
,
others
clam
assert or affirm strongly; state to be true or existing
claim
it is for education.
However
,
Accept space
,
I take the view of both.
Submitted by Sal on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Checks your essay in seconds
Instantly see mistakes you've made and learn how to avoid them.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays:
Turn your IELTS writing into band 7+
Just type your IELTS essay and receive a clear, detailed report and band score in a moment.