Five months ago, you started renting an apartment on a six-month agreement. You now wish to stay in the apartment for longer than the six months you originally agreed with the owner. Write a letter to the owner of your apartment. In your letter - say how long you now want to rent the apartment for - explain why your plans have changed - tell the owner about a problem in the apartment

Dear Landlord, I am writing regarding our rental agreement. Originally, I signed a six-month contract which started on January 1st, 2026.

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, I should leave your apartment on June 30th, 2026.

However

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, I want to extend

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agreement for one more year until the end of June

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2027. I had planned to leave Taipei after I graduated from National Taiwan University

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summer. Recently, I received an ideal internship offer from Google Taiwan.

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, I decided to stay in Taipei. The location of your apartment is close to my company, which is convenient for my commute. Everything here is perfect except for one problem: The resident on the third floor always makes noise at midnight.

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I have visited him many times and asked him to avoid disturbing the neighbours, the situation has not improved. I would appreciate it if you could help resolve

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issue. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your reply. Kind regards, Jeff Yang

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Mar 15, 2026

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Say a bit more about the noise problem and how the owner can help.

coherence and cohesion

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You answer all parts of the task clearly.

coherence and cohesion

Your letter has a clear order, and each part is easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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lease extension
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