People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

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Modern world today
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many people opt to live in cities as it provides better living standards.
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this
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is not the case always
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lack of housing and air pollution are crucial in cities.
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can be effectively tackled by encouraging them to move rural
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in order to
decongest
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the
city
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.
City
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dwellers confront
problem
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the problem
of housing since the
city
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may not be able to
accommodates
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accommodate
entire population
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the entire population
which migrate to
there
objective case of they
them
their
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, in
cities families
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cities, families
city families
city city families
live in a highly combat houses without proper ventilation or sanitary facilities which eventually result in various health issues
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with
them.To illustrate, diseases
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as
joundice
yellowing of the skin and the whites of the eyes caused by an accumulation of bile pigment (bilirubin) in the blood; can be a symptom of gallstones or liver infection or anemia
jaundice
and
diarrhea
frequent and watery bowel movements; can be a symptom of infection or food poisoning or colitis or a gastrointestinal tumor
diarrhoea
are quite common among
city
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dwellers as they live in a
unhygienic
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conditions.
Moroever
in addition
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many old houses are in a
dilapated
in deplorable condition
dilapidated
state
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accidents,
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are
common occuring
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common, occurring
common occurring
over there
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for example
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fire breakouts and building collapses which kills thousands daily. Another
issueof
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issue of
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city
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the city
is the pollution.The more people produce more waste and
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waste hardly discarded properly
instead
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it pilled up in open
land fills
a low area that has been filled in
landfills
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poor air quality is due to the increase number of
automabole
a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
automobile
automobiles
bikers and cars which result in
smok
a cloud of fine particles suspended in a gas
smoke
smog
that causes deadly diseases.
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situation,
however
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is managed carefully if the government
take
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takes
initiative to relocate the
city
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dwellers properly into
small town
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a small town
small towns
that are less crowded.Certainly
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is not
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an
easy task but
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achievable
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an achievement
achievement
achievements
for which,
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, the government has to set
realistic goal
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realistic goals
a realistic goal
.
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build new housing apartments in
new
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a new area
area
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where small towns are situated
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the safety must be ensured.Until does get
approvel
the formal act of approving
approval
approvals
approve
from concerned authority
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do not start any construction
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meaning even in the rural
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there are some place are
delicates
exquisitely fine and subtle and pleasing; susceptible to injury
delicate
duplicates
delegates
to have buildings.
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this
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enables to reduce cities problem of overcrowding and housing issues for a great extend. In conclusion, cities are facing problems of improper housing facilities;
neverthele
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s,
this
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can be managed by making new strategies to shift the migrants to rural
area
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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