Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

#country #language

Modern world today

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it is common to see that people travel another country and stay there for a long period of time.Some consider

this

can be

challenge

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challenging

;

however

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I completely disagree with the viewpoint as I consider it is a great experience and a way of learning and accepting other

culture

Firstly

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

cauntry

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

county

century

where

natives

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the natives

speak an entirely different language from us is a

navel

an extended fictional work in prose; usually in the form of a story

novel

experience meaning the explorer required to initiate certain efforts to overcome if any issue confronts.

In other words

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this

is a learning phase which may be little difficult

initially

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but definitely picked up

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in a new place with unknown dialect creates communication difficulties.These days

this

can be effortlessly resolved by using translation application

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this

is a kind of saviour for backpackers.

Secondly

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there is a chance for experiencing in

culture

shock

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according to some

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Fortunately

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this

negative issue can be effectively tackled by learning much about the area

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

going to visit.In details, understanding of

culture

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their tradition, historical background

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and how

this

culture

is different from us and their rule and regulations.If anyone study

these

denotes a person or thing

this

information

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will surely handle the shock may a new visitor encounter.

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, the government

have provided

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has provided

had provided

basic information regarding the particular county and don't and

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DOS

dos

days

dose

nation

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the nation

nations

a nation

Consequently problems

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Consequently, problems

associated with language or

culture

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cultural

difference can be minimised. In conclusion, modern

world people

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world, people

have never worried about

language difference

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language differences

the language difference

and travelling abroad.

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
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