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Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Modern world today
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many students
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Are
 majoring from university
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 various academic
subjects whereas
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subjects, whereas
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others point out that skill training should be encouraged.I completely support
later's view
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the later's view
 as vocational
workers
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worker
 shortage has bee increasing which impacts
smooth functioning
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the smooth functioning
 of building sites. A good reason for supporting to start more vocational development institutions is that it is a crucial time when there is no sufficient staff for construction, painting, cleaning and farming area.In other word
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as more and more youngsters are motivated to pursue their career in professional jobs
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this
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 entirely tarnished underdeveloped skilled job sector.Employer 's has confronted
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challenges
 of lacking expert technicians to carry out their work in time with the precision.
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it is advised that more industrial training institutes should be started.
Secondly
, Children are forced to take academic subjects without viewing whether the student has the ability to lean abstract ideas.To illustrate
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some research found that all learners are not good at typical education
instead
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they would perform really great in handy works
such
 as plumbing
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working, driving and cooking.
Therefore
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many experts argue that direct them into learn what they like;
consequently
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they could
excell
distinguish oneself
excel
excelled
 in their field.
Finally
, I believe issues with the skills shortage needs to be resolved as soon as possible
otherwise
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this
 could cause imbalance in our economy as our county required to outsource from other countries which is probably an expensive and not feasible solution for a long term settlement. In conclusion, it is highly significant to encourage our younger generation to pick up vocational job as it
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 has a decent career option.It is predicted that in
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an
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world both
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world, both
 professionals and skilled workers are equally important.
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