Nowadays parents are sending their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

At present days,
study
in abroad
is become
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has become
is becoming
becomes
a trend. Because, parents are highly encouraged to send their children
for
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to
higher
study
to any reputed institute by which they gain international exposure and confidence. But the disadvantage of
this
fact is that
such
trips are very
expensive often
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expensive, often
and
also
can cause of a security threat. Going abroad for educational purpose has lots of advantages. By doing
this
the young generation can meet with new peoples and new cultures. They can learn to survive in
such
kind of difficult situation where things are not available now and
then
. It enhances their confidence. Meeting new people, they can get more friend and know new people as well as it grows their communication skills. When someone is about to fall in any danger or any critical situation they learn to handle
this
.
This
makes them to become
a
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an
innovator.
Also
student who
have
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has
a degree from any reputed international university can get a good job easily.
That is
the main reason that encourage students along with their parents to pursue higher
study
in
foreign country
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foreign countries
.
On the other hand
,
study
in abroad sometimes is very expensive to bear for any parents. Many parents forced to take a loan for going their children to any university in overseas. In other word, some student cannot handle the foreign issues. Sometimes
overseas schools trip
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an overseas school trip
overseas school trip
the overseas school trip
overseas school's trip
overseas school trips
for children
is often cause
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is often causing
a security threat.
Student
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The student
often got engaged with
crime
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the crime
. The important thing is, many students are highly encouraged to stay over there forever and never come back to their homeland.
For example
, in Bangladesh, every year there are many
universities
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university
university's
student
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students
who go to abroad for higher
study
and never come back.
this
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This
is global lose for any country. To the conclude, I will say that there
is
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are
lots of advantages to
study
abroad but
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abroad, but
after completing
study
students should have to come back to their own country and apply all methodologies to
here
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
these they learnt from abroad to grow their own
countries
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country's
country
countries'
status.
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