During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say what you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir,
My name is Jane Morgan and we met during a plane journey from Mumbai to London. I have heard
lot
about Add an article
a lot
reputation
of your chain of Add an article
the reputation
restaurant
and would like to Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
work
in the same.
I have degree
in hotel management and currently working as Add an article
a degree
chef
in Add an article
a chef
4 star
hotel in Add a hyphen
4-star
the
west London. I have 2 years of experience as a Correct article usage
apply
chef
and can prepare Indian and Italian delicacies. If you will provide me with opportunity
to Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
work
in one of your restaurant
Change to a plural noun
restaurants
than
I will Correct your spelling
then
able
to prove myself as Add a missing verb
be able
useful
investment. Add an article
a useful
However
if you already have Add a comma
,However
chef
position filled Correct article usage
a chef
than
I will be happy to Correct your spelling
then
work
as an assistant to existing
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an existing
chef
.
I will be suitable for the job since I am very responsible. I also
have experience in working with Add an article
the group
a group
group
and Fix the agreement mistake
groups
also
as a team leader. I can also
work
under peer pressure.
I hope you will consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Jane MorganSubmitted by Jigar on
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