You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words Summarise the intormation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graphs compare and contrast data on the changes
different
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in different
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mode
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of transportation used by
school going
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children aged between 5 and 9
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year
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, in a country between 1990 and 2000,over a
10
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year
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period.
overall
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it is clear that
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the highest number of students preferred
to
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apply
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walking in the initial
year
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whereas
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,
car
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the car
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was used
for
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most of the students in the final
year
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Initially
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in 1990,approximately 13
trips
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were made on foot
however
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, only 6
trips
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were conducted in 2000 around 50% of reduction in 10
year
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time only
few
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were driven to school, less than 5
trips
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,which was at the bottom line in 1990.Other categories
includes
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include
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cycling,bus and on foot which remained around 6
trips
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In 2000,a large portion of the students
depend
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car for their day to day travelling to school and the figure was around 11 Walking was in the next position followed by bus a combination of both on foot and bus and cycling and which were around 4
trips
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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