some people say that the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make peope happy? What other thing in life can make people happy?

Nowadays, the reasons for
peoples
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people's
happiness is now a topic of discussion. Many opine that the major thing that brings a life long happiness is to be extremely rich. Though with
money affordability
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money, affordability
and fame is guaranteed
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there are other things aside
money
that can bring about joy.
Firstly
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the main thing that
money
gives is self satisfaction. Many are satisfied because they have all their needs and want at their
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disposal, thus
thus
leading to high self esteem
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For example
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billionaires are able to afford pricey clothes
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good schools for their children
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vacation any time they want more so best medical attention. The thought that they can have anything they so desire makes them glad
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Secondly
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being wealthy makes people famous
thus
well known people are usually respected in the society
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For instance
Dangote is famous because he is a multimillionaire. It is
thus
evident that having
money
is encompassing.
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However, professional
achievement is another thing that can
put a smile always
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always put a smile
on many peoples
face
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faces
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For
example my
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example, my
Father is an average income
earner but
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earner, but
he always tells me he is a happy and fulfilled man because he rose to the pinnacle of his profession
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Furthermore many
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Furthermore, many
are
also
glad if they have a good home with children of high
morals even
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morals, even
if they have little to eat and drink. They believe their kids give a picture of who they are. These I
also
consider as other things that can make people joyful. In conclusion,
although
many believe that riches makes people happy because they can afford anything they want more so it guarantees peace of mind and self satisfaction. I think Professional achievement and a good family are other things that can make people truly comfortable and happy in life.

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