WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on
this
task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Some people argue that humans will not able to do something to progress the our circle only states and famous organizations will make a distinguish in todays complex society.
Personally I
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Personally, I
completely agree with
this
point of view for
range
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a range
of reasons. It is no doubt true that, improving environment may only be
govermantal
relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state
governmental
responsibility and even some companies may contribute
for
Suggestion
to
our
nature
.
First
and foremost, it could be argued that ameliorating contributions for our circle by the officials could possibly bring about a one of the
healhty
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
society. It would appear that, an increase will be obvious in environmental issues by
tacking
very attractive; capturing interest
taking
some steps by the
government
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government, such
such
as, mitigating transport payments, organising some conferences regarding protect to our
nature
, cultivating a lot of trees in every
places especially
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places, especially
in urban areas which allow people commence to preserve our environment while
insiparing
stimulating or exalting to the spirit
inspiring
to
goverment’s
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
steps
Moreover
, Government implement fire for some people who litters our
nature
while throwing some wrap of products and bottles, cutting trees in the forest as well as using numerous number of private cars. In
this
ocassion
an event that occurs at a critical time
occasion
action
equation
, people’s steps consist of only
littering not
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littering, not
contribution but
Suggestion
a contribution, but
a contribution but
as a result
of
this
plural of "this"
these
steps they may become
ecofriendly
.
For example
, In Estonia government could take to solve environmental problems while leşsen transport fee and even
have been
Suggestion
has been
had been
free to charge of buses in some regions with
this
doing they
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doing, they
have diminished usage of private cars and achieved to prevent pollution of fresh air. In
conclusion it
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conclusion, it
is
understandble
capable of being apprehended or understood
understandable
that,
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
and companies’ steps in terms of protecting our
nature
may be a lot in comparison with human beings.

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