In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I believe that it is important to take

care

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of people in an old age. Nursing homes or some people like to call them

retirement

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homes, where there are registered nurses to take

care

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, are important part of ensuring

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care

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.

Retirement

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homes can be

costly but

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costly, but

it is important to ensure that

quality

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the quality

of

care

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is maintained

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homes are important part of society. It allows one to have a decent living and

also

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have an access to needed

healthcare

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health care

. Various studies have shown that the

retirement

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homes play an important role in ensuring both the physical and the mental health. It allows people to have friends and

also

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allows a community living.

Retirement

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homes can be costly to maintain. There are minimum requirements around infrastructure to be maintained and there is need to have

minimum number

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a minimum number

the minimum number

of registered nurses. All

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adds to cost of maintaining these places.

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results in an obvious question of who pays for all these costs. On one side, there is an argument that it is

responsibility

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the responsibility

a responsibility

of

government

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to take

care

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of its people. On

other hand

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the other hand

, there is an argument that quality of

care

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will be reduced as

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government

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the government

cannot pay for all ageing

population

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populations

. I believe that right path is in

middle

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the middle

. There is a significant population who

have

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has

means

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the means

to pay for the

retirement

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homes and must pay for it. There can be a minimum

guidelines

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guideline

put out by

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government

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the government

to identify the criteria for

this

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.

For example

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, if a person has income above a certain threshold, or person has minimum savings. But it is must that

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government

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the government

takes

care

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of

rest

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the rest

of

population

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the population

who cannot pay for these homes. Overall, I believe that it is

responsibility

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the responsibility

of a

government

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to

lay

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lie

to down the guidelines for maintaining

quality

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the quality

of the

retirement

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homes, lay down the guidelines on who pays and what

amount but

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amount, but

ensures that each and every citizen has access to these places at the end of the day.