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Some people say that holding sport competitions can cause problems for the host country. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are people who hold the views that sport competitions causes problems for the host
country
 and there are people who do not hold
such
 views. I completely agree with the latter people. Conducting sports events in a
country whether
Accept comma addition
country, whether
 it is participating or non participating will result in a series of environmental issues. Wastes generated after
such
 events are
huge burden
Suggestion
a huge burden
 for the hosting
country
.
For example
, subsequent to the 2014 World cup and 2016 Olympics in Brazil, the
country
 had to spend millions of dollars to clean their cities.
On the other hand
, if
such
 competitions have admirers from all over the world,
then
 the hosting
country
 can raise huge revenue in terms of tax.
Furthermore
, people in the host
country
 can develop a sense of pride and confidence in their nation. In conclusion,
country
Suggestion
a country
 which organise
such
 competitions should analyse the cost and benefit it produce.

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