The charts below the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Diagrams display a percentage ratio of three different
kind
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kinds
of nutrients,
such
as
sodium
, saturated fats and added
sugar
, which typical Americans eat every day
;
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;
and which may be hazardous to
human's
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human
health.
First
chart
describe
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describes
a percentage of
sodium which
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sodium, which
USA residents may eat per a day. The most
feck
marked by erratic changeableness in affections or attachments
fickle
of
sodium
can be ingested during a dinner. In the minority are two parts - breakfast meals and food for snack. At the
second
chart
such
as at the
third
chart there
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chart, there
is the same percentage of saturated fats and added
sugar
for breakfast. In spite of
this
, gradation of progress payment for snacks is different.
At
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On
In
the
third
chart it
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chart, it
is
grater
greater in size or importance or degree
greater
than
at
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on
the
second
chart
. Basically all types of nutrients are distributed in equal proportions, except an added
sugar
. According to
this
, it should be mentioned that for dinner Americans consume on
overage
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
43 % of
sodium
, 37 % of saturated
fats
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fat
and 23 % of added
sugar
. For lunch percentages like that - 29 % of
sodium
, 26 % of saturated fats and 19 % of added
sugar
.
Moreover
, 14 % of
sodium
and by 16 %
for
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of
from
saturated fats and added
sugar
are rank to breakfast.
Hence
it appears that Americans can get 14 % of
sodium
, 21 % of fats and 42 % of
sugar
with food during a snack. All kinds of nutrients which have been mentioned, may bring harmful consequences for
human's
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human
health if they would be eaten in a great amount.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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