Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I would have to completely disagree with the statement above. In the following paragraphs I will outline the basic concepts of my position.
First
of all, I will least the major disadvantages for employers. On the today's
market
a
company
must be very flexible in order to compete with other firms. So, imagine the situation when a
company
can not
can not
cannot
fire its employees to stay on the
market
. It will lead to loosing not only a profit, but the clients,
market
share and competitive ability. Now, imagine the situation when a
company
is growing fast, everything is good and the
next
few years are going to be excellent. So, employers need more people to extend the production.
However
, nobody can tell what will happen in a few years. In
this
case, employers will be
afraif
filled with fear or apprehension
afraid
to hire a new people and extend their business because they will not be able to fire them if something goes wrong. Another important aspect of
this
is that a
company
can not
can not
cannot
have the best employees. It
can not
can not
cannot
hire
the
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The
better
one
without dismissing another employee. What kind of disadvantages will have an
employee
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Employee
in exchange for
this
kind of
job
security?
First
of all, it will be very difficult to find a
job
if
one
is not the best, because an employer does not want to spend money on
one
's education.
Besides
,
employer
Suggestion
an employer
employers
the employer
will not have a chance to fire
one
if he does not do his
job
well.
Second
of all, employees with
this
kind of security tend not to perfect themselves because after they are hired they can not lose their
job
. In conclusion, I would like to add that
this
statement has some positive aspects
too
Accept comma addition
too, such
to such
to to such
such
as constancy, a strong spirit of the
company
, etc.
This
system takes place in Japan and some companies succeeded in
it
Suggestion
It
. But I think that the reason of it subsists in the Japanese traditions, the particular cultural features, habits and customs.
However
, on today's
market
here in the United States a
company
can not afford to hire employees for their entire life.
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