Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that

progress

in diverse areas are required for

country

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the country

, while others opine that more attention need to be focused on

country’s economic

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the country’s economic development

development

.

Although

economic growth has much of importance, I strongly believe that a

country

will be

sustainability

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sustained

developed

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development

if it is enhanced in all political and social fields

in addition

to economic one. There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries.

Firstly

, the more

economy

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the economy

grows, the more job

opportunities create

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opportunities, create

and the higher salary is given to

citizen

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a citizen

citizens

the citizen

. Take North Korea, which its economic

development

has been retarded by international sanctions for almost a 20-year period,

for example

. A large number of its inhabitants

has been suffering

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have been suffering

from lack of enough vacancies and

also

experiencing some difficulties in international trading.

Secondly

, economic

progress

ensures the availability of

high amount

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the high amount

of financial resources for government so as to be spent on infrastructure and public services

such

as transportation, public health, insurance system etc.

Finally

, an economically developed

country

benefits from its wide economic relations with other countries, resulting in great influential political relations.

On the other hand

, it is too narrow as an approach to limit

development concept

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the development concept

just into economic

progress

. From the social science point of view, social welfare and environmental concerns are two suitable factors can measure how a society is developed.

Welfare concept

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The welfare concept

includes all political, social, economic and cultural conditions. How much a society and a government respect

to

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for

the human rights, personal freedoms, social security and democracy not only are in same importance as economic factors but they

also

are driving forces behind any sustainable economic success.

Furthermore

, a society is developed, to whom environment protection means everything and

therefore

all developments have to be environmentally sustainable. To recapitulate, economic

development

of a

country

seems worthwhile;

nonetheless

, different sorts of

progress

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progress, such

such

as political and social are as significant as economic.