Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Environment
Suggestion
The environment
has been deteriorating
Suggestion
is deteriorating
day by day. Some proponents argue that it is people's duty to look after the
environment
;
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;
however
, others are of the opinion that it is
Government's
Suggestion
the Government's responsibility
responsibility
to
care
for the
environment
. In
this
essay, I will shed some light on both views with my opinion. On the one hand, people who think it is people's concern to take
care
of the
environment
might have been thinking that people are the main
stake holder
someone entrusted to hold the stakes for two or more persons betting against one another; must deliver the stakes to the winner
stakeholder
of the
environment
. Because
environment
Suggestion
the environment
has been providing all the life
sustaing
lengthen or extend in duration or space
sustaining
resources it has only to
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
people, it is
people's obligation
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a people's obligation
the people's obligation
to replenish the natural resources as well as
responsibility
to its other inhabitants by taking
care
of the
environment
.
For instance
, a research has been published in the Nature that the increasing global warming, which is the consequences of
indiscriminately
Suggestion
indiscriminate
cutting down of trees and emissions of co2 from industries, would be so unbearable in the near future if people would not harness now it by taking
care
of the
environment
. So it is people who should think about the
environment
.
On the other hand
, people who think it's
government duty
Suggestion
a government duty
to take
care
of the
environment
convinced that governments have the real ability to take
care
of the
environment
. As not only governments have the
responsibility
to protect the
environment but
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environment, but
also
have the capacity to resolve it.
For example
, government can impose extra tax on log processing firms to discourage excessive cutting down of trees, the presence of which is thought is the most indispensable balancing component of the
environment
.
In addition
, government can undertake mega projects like installation of air refiner in every city.
Therefore
, it is Governments that have both ethical and legal
responsibility
to take
care
of the
environment
. To conclude, in
this
case, my conclusion will be a mixed one; it is people's duty to take
care
of the
environment
to live in a better
environment
where it is
Government's
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the Government's responsibility
responsibility
to
to keep
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keep
its people in a safe
environment
by taking
care
of the
environment
.

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