It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is essential that children are able to differentiate between doing right and wrong early in life,
punishment
is vital in assisting them to learn the differences
.
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.
In my opinion, I strongly agree that
punishment
as a consequence of disobedience is necessary because
this
serves as of form of deterrence as well as installing fear of being punished.
However
, punishing by correctional
method
ought to be used by parents and tutors to teach positive ways of behaving.
Firstly
, I totally believe that
youngster
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youngsters
the youngster
should be punished in order to be able to distinguish between correct and incorrect things because
this
will serve as a
method
of
deterent
something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress
deterrent
to them.
In other words
, they would know there are
repurcusions
a remote or indirect consequence of some action
repercussions
for their actions,
this
would likely prompt them to act rightly.
For example
, school children in Lagos were banned from observing their
mid-term
the middle of the gestation period
midterm
breaks in 2018 as a
punishment
for disobeying the school rules and regulations.
Consequently
, making use of corporal
punishment
such
as; beating, giving
assignment
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the assignment
an assignment
assignments
, and banning
fromhaving play times have been
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from were playing times
from were play times
from were played times
from having play times have been
a distinctive way of correcting the younger ones.
However
, corrective
punishment
should be made use of by father's and mother's as well teachers to
incalcate
teach and impress by frequent repetitions or admonitions
inculcate
fantastic morals
into
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in
children.
This
is because a child is more likely to imitate
actions
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the actions
and inactions of people around them easily, so be using
this
method
they would be able to learn quickly and
apprioprately
in an appropriate manner
appropriately
the best of behaviours through
this
. So, allowing older people to teach
this measures
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these measures
this measure
will be an effective means of
eduacting
give an education to
educating
the young wards.
For Instance
, a report by the Teacher's association of Niger state in 2019, stated that kids that were punished through correctional means are more expressive and outspoken
then
those that were beaten when they acted wrongly.
Thus
,
this
method
should be used more often
by
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in
the
elderly to
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elderly, to
efficiently correct the youngsters. In conclusion, I believe that corporal
punishment
is an important
correctional
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corrective
correction
method
for children to distinguish
proper and improper behaviour
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the proper and improper behaviour
because
this
will deter them from
repetiting
the act of doing or performing again
repeating
such
behaviour and make them conscious of the consequences of their actions.
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