Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?

In recent times, many cities are undergoing transformation from old underdeveloped cities to high-tech modern cities. Despite the main advantages of

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modernization which

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modernization, which

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increasing

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in employment rate and

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employment rate and

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tourism

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tourist

attraction, it has several disadvantages too including deforestation and

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an increase

in pollution level.

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with, the process of turning old areas into big buildings generates more employment and increases

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rates.

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is because many work projects that are outsourced to smaller cities leads to the development of massive and attractive tall office buildings that eventually creates more job opportunities for people living in that area.

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,

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of cities often

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direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes

attracts

tourists that

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boost

the economy of the country.

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, in India, in 2017 it was found that after the

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of areas like Gurgaon that comes under NCR (National Capital Region),

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rate was increased by 7%.

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, growth in the cities improves the life of local people.

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, the transformation of

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the smaller cities

to modern cyber cities comes with a price as

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involves cutting of trees, and increase in the pollution level. In fact, construction of high-tech buildings is usually done by chopping off large areas of forests and creating infrastructure like flyovers, to accommodate more vehicles on

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the road

. In a recent survey, it was found, that for every new building constructed, 10 trees are destroyed.

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,

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causes a great amount of environmental damage. In conclusion,

modernization

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is transforming the lives of people across the globe.

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it is fruitful as it creates more job opportunities and increases

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rate, it

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has some drawbacks that it is deteriorating our environment, due to high need of deforestation and pollution caused when more vehicles are allowed on roads.