Some people think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

Automobiles and other vehicles are

essential part

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an essential part

of transportation for

majority

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the majority

of the people residing here in Pakistan. Most people think that the prices of the

fuel

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should be raised by the government to solve the problems

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related to the

environment

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, persisting in our country

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essay will discuss that how

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refers to the speaker or writer

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disagree, moderately, with the given statement.

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of all uses of the vehicles should be

asscessed

evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of

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accessed

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Currently according

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Currently, according

to the statistics, 80% of the population

own

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owns

their own

asset be

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asset, be

it a car or a bike. The best advantage of owning a vehicle is that it is cheaper than renting a car or looking for some other alternative like taking service from Uber or Careem. So all of

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things run on the

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fuel which

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fuel, which

in short becomes the basic necessity of every

house hold

a social unit living together

household

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usage of the

fuel

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does cause damage to the

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environment but

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environment, but

in my opinion the government should look

in to

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into

the other important factors which are causing bigger problems to our

environment

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. Problems created by the usage of

fuel

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in the cars and other vehicles are very less as compared to the other factors which are contributing to ruin the air.

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the

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and the aerosol sprays that we use daily emits

chloroflourocarbons

a fluorocarbon with chlorine; formerly used as a refrigerant and as a propellant in aerosol cans

chlorofluorocarbons

(CFCs). The

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release, as from one's grip

release

rules

realise

of

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harmful chemical evolves in the air and

effects

have an effect upon

affects

our ozone layer

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the layer which protects the planet earth from the damaging

ultravoilet

radiation lying in the ultraviolet range; wave lengths shorter than light but longer than X rays

ultraviolet

radiations

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which is depleting over the passage of time. The prices of

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things should be raised because they are causing more damage to the

environment

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. It is concluded that the prices of the

fuel

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should not be raised for the common means of commute

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like cars and

motor bikes

small motorcycle with a low frame and small wheels and elevated handlebars

motorbikes

etc

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as it is, nowadays

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necessity

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the necessity

a necessity

for the layman and

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the government should take appropriate measures to eradicate other problems which are much more harmful to our

envoirnment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

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