Some people think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

Automobiles and other vehicles are
essential part
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an essential part
of transportation for
majority
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the majority
of the people residing here in Pakistan. Most people think that the prices of the
fuel
should be raised by the government to solve the problems
,
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,
related to the
environment
, persisting in our country
.
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.
This
essay will discuss that how
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
disagree, moderately, with the given statement.
First
of all uses of the vehicles should be
asscessed
evaluate or estimate the nature, quality, ability, extent, or significance of
assessed
accessed
.
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.
Currently according
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Currently, according
to the statistics, 80% of the population
own
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owns
their own
asset be
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asset, be
it a car or a bike. The best advantage of owning a vehicle is that it is cheaper than renting a car or looking for some other alternative like taking service from Uber or Careem. So all of
such
things run on the
fuel which
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fuel, which
in short becomes the basic necessity of every
house hold
a social unit living together
household
.
Although
usage of the
fuel
does cause damage to the
environment but
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environment, but
in my opinion the government should look
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the other important factors which are causing bigger problems to our
environment
. Problems created by the usage of
fuel
in the cars and other vehicles are very less as compared to the other factors which are contributing to ruin the air.
For example
the
refErigeators
and the aerosol sprays that we use daily emits
chloroflourocarbons
a fluorocarbon with chlorine; formerly used as a refrigerant and as a propellant in aerosol cans
chlorofluorocarbons
(CFCs). The
relese
release, as from one's grip
release
rules
realise
of
this
harmful chemical evolves in the air and
effects
have an effect upon
affects
our ozone layer
,
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,
the layer which protects the planet earth from the damaging
ultravoilet
radiation lying in the ultraviolet range; wave lengths shorter than light but longer than X rays
ultraviolet
radiations
,
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,
which is depleting over the passage of time. The prices of
such
things should be raised because they are causing more damage to the
environment
. It is concluded that the prices of the
fuel
should not be raised for the common means of commute
,
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,
like cars and
motor bikes
small motorcycle with a low frame and small wheels and elevated handlebars
motorbikes
etc
,
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,
as it is, nowadays
,
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necessity
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the necessity
a necessity
for the layman and
instead
the government should take appropriate measures to eradicate other problems which are much more harmful to our
envoirnment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
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