the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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First

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The first

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one is just

including

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includes

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a few trees and an unuseful beach.

This

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island

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's west to east measure is approximately 250 meters. The

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map of

this

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island

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shows us that

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island

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can make a more interesting place which with

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the construct

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construct

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construction

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some

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of some

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buildings

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construction finalised

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apply

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a restaurant located north of the

island

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and a reception building down the restaurant.

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, some accommodation

buildings

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located

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are located

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west and east

side

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of the

island

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. A pier here south of the

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which people can connect the

island

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. After that people can use a vehicle track to reach reception and restaurant

buildings

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, a footpath made for people can connect accommodation

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and to the beach. Those maps show us an

island

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's changing

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from an

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empty

island

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touristy

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a touristy

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island

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Submitted by serkanbulak on Thu Aug 01 2019

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, buildings with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

128 words

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