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You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about the challenges that I have currently been experiencing in the six months. I believe that teamwork is very important in a workplace to achieve a common goal. I started experiencing some major issues with my colleague since she joined the company. She is slothful and
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 has prevented us from carrying out our tasks properly. I implore the management to schedule a meeting for us in order to analyse our shortcomings and reach a way to go forward. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Adoga Patience
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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