Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or diagree?

In the modern era, the advertising world
spread
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spreads
all across the streams, and it has been covered each and every corner
on
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of
the society. Since influence takes a major part in people's
purchase
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porches
, some have argued that the
purchase
of famous consumer
product
drive because of the influence of advertising to the actual requirement of the place where they are sold. I strongly agree with
this
view because advertising creates not only
last longing impression
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a last longing impression
in
mind but
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mind, but
also
attract towards the
purchase
of the unessential products.
First
and foremost, an advertisement easily strikes into the
mind
of an individual and persist for a quite long period.
For example
, I, myself have come across in situations where I tend to buy products based on commercial impression or created
mind
memories rather than the actual need.
This
is because it creates an impression and when the same
product
found in the shopping mall or in
online unintended
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the online unintended purchase
purchase
happen for the same.
This
is,
therefore
, one of the reasons for the
purchase
of products due to the effect of advertising.
Moreover
,
advertising
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the advertising
can present a
product
in
such
a way so peoples tend to buy those products without the actual need. The reason behind
this
is that in many cases advertising companies focus or create some target area of the society so that the
product
can create its own space regardless of the requirement.
For instance
, a hand
sanitizer
is not the actual
need but
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need, but
because of its advertisement claims of abolishing 99% germs without washing
hand
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hands
with water have created an image that nowadays peoples buying it.
Thus
, a properly targeted advertisement can increase or even create a new consumer base for that
product
without worthy use. In conclusion, since commercials create a significant role in the
purchase
of any
product
, consumers are buying more and more unnecessary products due to its image created in
mind
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the mind
and the way of
product
representations. The advertising industry is growing
in
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at
such
a pace that in future
also
, it will help to boost the sale of
product one or another
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one product or another
way.

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