Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In our present media trend, it is widely considered by a section of people that the reports of mass media highly follow the negative issues compared to the positive changes in the society. It has tremendous detrimental effects on our community where we live in. In my opinion, I do believe that the media is highlighting on crime, violence, rape, anarchy, political and social unrests and so on, rather positive changes. On the one hand, it is evident that whenever we open the newspapers, television channels, radio or any social media, the number of crime and emergencies are more than around 70 percents and rest others are neutral and positive reports. Nowadays, a big proportion of people around the world are more violent and aggressive to commit crime and earn money and fame.

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group does not consider the benefits of whole country people and its economy without their self interest.

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, media get the chance to cover the story and make profit as

their

people in general

they

TRP increase within a very short time. The sales of the newspapers increase whenever the world goes through anarchy, violence, emergency and political unrest.

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, at present the media is focusing the dengue outbreak and flood in the south Asian countries.

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, the numbers of the stories focus on significant positive changes are limited as it would not help the media to make quick profit. For

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reason, the media activists are not interested to find out some

successful

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success

stories and publish them.

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a common trend among the generation is that they

continuously

seemingly without interruption

continually

follow newspapers or watch television during the political movement, clash, election and some

emergences

a sudden unforeseen crisis (usually involving danger) that requires immediate action

emergencies

disaster

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a disaster

and outbreak of diseases. In conclusion, it is an important duty of media to inform the

world people

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world, people

regarding the all human-created violence, uncertainties and natural events as the other countries can move forward to help them to overcome the critical situations as sooner as possible.

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media

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the media

have to take their own responsibilities to bring a positive change by publishing reports on success, innovation, discovery and many more so that men can lead

happy and peaceful life

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a happy and peaceful life

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Topic Vocabulary:

pessimistic outlook
exposed to negative news
stress and anxiety
success stories
balanced reporting
well-informed public
rational decisions
sense of helplessness
apathy
skew public perception
mistrust in institutions
enhance well-being
mental health
manipulate public opinion
serve specific agendas

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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