Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

One
of the modern challenges in post soviet union countries to learn the developed countries
experience
by studying in
theirs
of them or themselves
their
educational institutions.
Although
these
trend
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trends
can be considered
very important development
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a very important development
by some, the negative sides of
this
approach should be
also
taken into the consideration.
This
essay will discuss both views before reaching the conclusion. From the
one
hand, it is obvious that studying
abroad offers to
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abroad offers
students several privileges which can not be replaced with the studying in
home
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the home country
country
.
Firstly
, to gain access
of
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to
the library of top ranked Universities can be the dream of any student who is not able to see the same condition in his or her
home
country
.
Secondly
, international
experience
which is learned
by
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from
these young generations in those leading Universities abroad will be put into the practice as soon as they return back to their
home
country
. Despite the fact that, some students who wishes to stay and live in those countries they have already obtained their diploma, some of them refuse to continue to get the benefits from social programmes and prefer to come their
country
of origin and receive
high salary
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a higher salary
higher salary
higher salaries
from the jobs which they were offered due to their backgrounds by the appropriate organizations.
On the other hand
, it can be enumerated the variety of drawbacks addressed to the studying abroad
.
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.
One
of them is
cultural shock effect
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a cultural shock effect
the cultural shock effect
which is impacted by many of those who leave their
home
countries for the purpose of studying.
One
can face with obstacles like diet or food diversity and so on.
For instance
, during my visit in South Korea the
first
month of my stay in locals I had very bad
experience
with their traditional
foods namely
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foods, namely
“Bulgogi” which was cooked with sugar together with meat. The truth is that in fact I have never tried it before and as I was very hungry, I was obliged to eat it just because in order to not to offend my Korean counterparts.
Secondly
, another negative side is the lack of the care of parents of students.
One
can miss to meet his or her parents after some time of the living abroad no matter even the modern technologies allow people to communicate over the social networking applications. It should be
also
noted that the parents are the most influenced part of the sides as
payer
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the payer
of high tuition fees for their children’s. In
this
respect, education in abroad can bring problem
such
as financial deficit to the families.
Therefore education
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Therefore, education
abroad plans should be avoided in
this situations
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this situation
these situations
. In conclusion, while studying abroad can be
lifelong
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a lifelong experience
experience
for students and bring sufficient benefits to them, the unexpected financial strain and psychological factors should not be neglected.

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