Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

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of the modern challenges in post soviet union countries to learn the developed countries

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by studying in

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of them or themselves

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educational institutions.

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trends

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a very important development

by some, the negative sides of

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approach should be

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essay will discuss both views before reaching the conclusion. From the

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hand, it is obvious that studying

abroad offers to

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abroad offers

students several privileges which can not be replaced with the studying in

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home

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the home country

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the library of top ranked Universities can be the dream of any student who is not able to see the same condition in his or her

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country

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, international

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which is learned

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these young generations in those leading Universities abroad will be put into the practice as soon as they return back to their

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. Despite the fact that, some students who wishes to stay and live in those countries they have already obtained their diploma, some of them refuse to continue to get the benefits from social programmes and prefer to come their

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of origin and receive

high salary

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a higher salary

higher salary

higher salaries

from the jobs which they were offered due to their backgrounds by the appropriate organizations.

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, it can be enumerated the variety of drawbacks addressed to the studying abroad

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of them is

cultural shock effect

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a cultural shock effect

the cultural shock effect

which is impacted by many of those who leave their

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countries for the purpose of studying.

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can face with obstacles like diet or food diversity and so on.

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, during my visit in South Korea the

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month of my stay in locals I had very bad

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with their traditional

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foods, namely

“Bulgogi” which was cooked with sugar together with meat. The truth is that in fact I have never tried it before and as I was very hungry, I was obliged to eat it just because in order to not to offend my Korean counterparts.

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, another negative side is the lack of the care of parents of students.

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can miss to meet his or her parents after some time of the living abroad no matter even the modern technologies allow people to communicate over the social networking applications. It should be

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noted that the parents are the most influenced part of the sides as

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the payer

of high tuition fees for their children’s. In

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respect, education in abroad can bring problem

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as financial deficit to the families.

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this situation

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. In conclusion, while studying abroad can be

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a lifelong experience

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for students and bring sufficient benefits to them, the unexpected financial strain and psychological factors should not be neglected.

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Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with the police or the military. Others think that women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child’s development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?