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With development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem

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These days adolescent are more attracted towards
internet
 surfing and social media
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to make new friends and relations.But some
time excess of
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time in excess of
 these kind of activities
could be lead
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could lead
 to risky situations.There are several ways in which
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we can control that
activities
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activity
 to protect youngsters from unseen
danger
. To solve
internet
danger
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,
government
 and parents should take some sensible steps in order to save youngsters.
Firstly from
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Firstly, from
government
 contribution
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they need to organise some
internet
 awareness plan in schools and colleges
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in which they provide I formation about
advantages
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the advantages
 and
disadvantages disadvantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
 of surfing.
Thus
 to
insure
make certain of
ensure
there
of them or themselves
their
 maximum safety.
Secondly
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,
government
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the government
 should have rights to asses the data and accounts of youngsters
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so that if any inappropriate activity will be point so
government
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the government
 must take any action to
kerb
lessen the intensity of; temper; hold in restraint; hold or keep within limits
curb
 it. Apart from the
government
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,
parents
also
 play an important role in protecting their wards from
internet
 dangers.
First
 of all
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it is vital for parents to keep close eye on
children
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children's
 activities on
internet
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the internet
.
In addition
 to that
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,
they should save some parental lock on some unsafe social sites
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,
which could put youngsters in
danger
.
Moreover proper
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Moreover, proper
counseling
something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
counselling
 should be given to children
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to follow
right path
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the right path
. In conclusion
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,
it is true that due to
increase
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increased
 usage of
internet
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the internet
 and social media
amongs
in division, with shares to each
amongst
among
 youngsters
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,
can
resulted
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result
 in any kind of
danger
.
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However
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,
it can be
stoped
(of a nose) blocked
stopped
 by taking certain measures by
government
 and parents.
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