The chart below shows the value of one’s country exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015
The bar chart provides data about the income that one country received from the exportation of five different categories of
products
in two separate years, 2015 and 2016, while
the table represents the changes that they experienced during the two-year period.
Overall
, the highest income is generated from the exports of products
derived from the
black gold and from engineered items, Correct article usage
apply
while
exports of textiles produced less value even though compared to the other categories it
experienced the highest increase in the Correct pronoun usage
they
second
year.
Regarding the first year, while
petroleum and engineered goods stood at just under $60 billions
and $58 Correct your spelling
billion
Add the preposition
ofbillions
billions
export earnings respectively, agricultural Correct your spelling
billion
products
and textiles earnings were the least export earnings in both the
years. Correct article usage
apply
Following
this
, gems and jewellery earned equal money round
about $42 Correct your spelling
around
billions
in these two years.
With regard to the table, the largest change Change to singular
billion
took
in textiles that Wrong verb form
taken
it
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
boost
up 15.24% in 2016 compared to Wrong verb form
boosted
the
2015, Change the article
apply
on the other hand
, gems and jewellery plunged down to 5.18%. All other products
change in 2016 like agriculture products
, petroleum products
, and engineered goods escalated by 0.81%, 3%, and 8.5%, respectively.Submitted by fedebarca22 on
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