People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? what should be done to encourage people to protect the environment. Give reasons for your answer or include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Environment
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 plays an important role in the healthy
living
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lives
of human beings. Despite the fact of
importance
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the importance
of
environment
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, there are numerous concerns have aroused due to careless human being
actions
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actioned
such
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as deforestation and air
pollution
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are
few
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a few
of the
resons
a rational motive for a belief or action
reasons
to blame it. On the one hand, due to selfishness of human being deforestation has boomed by causing an adverse effect on our
environment
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. To illustrate
this
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, people cutting forests to construct houses just to accommodate the needs of over population.
Although
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, shelter is important for every human being,
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environment
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the environment
should be considered equally. In my view,
Government
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the Government
should give building house permission in an open area, away from
greenery
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the greenery
. Research proved that plantation activity in the society has added an awareness of changing environmental issues.
On the other hand
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, air
pollution
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is another cause of environmental issues. Due to
rapid phase
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the rapid phase
of life, every individual seeking advance transportation to commute on
daily basis
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a daily basis
.
For instance
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,
instead
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of walking or pushing on bikes to work people prefer to commute by cars to save time and effort.
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The consequent use
of motor vehicles has
huge negative impact
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a huge negative impact
on the
environment
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. Government
authourities
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
should introduce
carfree
free of trouble and worry and care
carefree
days to on
regular basis
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a regular basis
instead
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of annually.
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Therefore people
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Therefore, people
get regular practice of avoiding the car usage and replacing it other transportation.
Moreover
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, WHO proved that annual event of
international car free day
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the international car free day
has highlighted the numerous
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
that included a minimal change of reduction of
pollution
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. In conclusion, deforestation and air
pollution
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are regarded as a cause of environmental issues and people held responsible for it.
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, implementing safe measures on
daily basis
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a daily basis
will minimize the environmental issues.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental responsibility
  • sustainable choices
  • green practices
  • eco-friendly
  • carbon footprint
  • renewable energy
  • recycling programs
  • environmental awareness
  • conservation efforts
  • climate change mitigation
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