In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

In
last years
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the last years
, a large
number
of countries have been suffering from the huge
number
of
graduated
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graduate
students who do not work. In
this
essay, I will discuss what factors that have made
this
phenomenon,
such
as the current education
system
,
then
, I will provide some significant solutions for these issues,
such
as changing the
way
that how the universities accept
student
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the student
students
a student
. On the one hand, the
first
reason for
this
for the unemployment of the qualified students is the
way
that the society looks for the person who do not have a
university
degree
.
This
is because in many countries they consider that a shame if you did not pass the
university
stage and you are less than others who had past it.
For instance
, a report from the
University
of Jordan showed that a large
number
of students
have have got
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have gotten
have got
got
get
are getting
their
university
degree
just to say that they have
one
not subject to defeat
won
. Another prime reason is the current method of applying to the
university
. It only depends on the total
number
of marks that the student has gotten in the national
exam regardless
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exam, regardless
in which subjects the student has gotten the highest marks.
this
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This
makes their chance to
study
their desired
university
major extremely hard.
As a result
, many students may
study
courses they do not interested in, or make a pressure on
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
majors more than others because of the
number
students who applied
on
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for
to
it because of their averages. And when they graduate, many of them will apply
to
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for
the same position and only a few
number
of them will get the job, and the other will be jobless. Clearly, our current look to the undergraduate students and the current seduction
system
play a major role in making finding a job extremely hard.
On the other hand
, there are remarkable solutions that can overcome these problems.
Firstly
, an appropriate solution for the
first
dilemma is that the government should encourage students to
study
a non
university
degree
majors
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major
,
such
as car fixing.
This
is can be done by opening colleges that take care of
such
courses and by the end of their
study they
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study, they
can get a certificate in the major they have studied. Regardless the
second
one, the ministry of education should change the
way
that pupils move from the school to the
university
by making a general
exam
who only about passing the school stage,
then
, it should allow the universities to establish their acceptance
system
on their own.
In other words
, they should accept students in any major based on a local
exam
that are made especially for that major.
As a result
, only who is interested in that course will apply for its test, and only who
is deserve
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is deserving
will pass the
exam
and
study
the course. To clarify, creating colleges for non
degree
courses and changing the
acceptance
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accepted
way
in the universities may help changing the current situation. To conclude, how people consider the person who are without a
university
degree
and the current acceptance
system
in the universities are major problems of unemployment;
however
, these issues can be overcome by applying some of the solutions that have been mentioned above.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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