University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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Studying abroad is becoming more and more, a part of the

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for university students. There are some disadvantages in studying abroad,

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being distant from family and friends and, possibly, dealing with another language.

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, if a person is able to face these problems, the advantages will overcompensate the disadvantages, advantages as being able to live in another culture and the gain of experience and responsibility in living distant from your home.

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with, being away from friends and family can be really hard, since

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person might suffer with loneliness and sadness,

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to those these sentiments can lead

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individual into a state of depression.

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, there are the problems in dealing with another language in an everyday context, even if

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one have studied

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language before, he or she will most likely find problems in doing tasks as going to supermarkets, going to restaurants, or in making friends as well.

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, there are many benefits that can come out of studying overseas, as an example of it is the possibility of living alone or with strangers,

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might sound strange, but living away from your family can bring benefits,

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being able to build more responsibility and character, since your family will not be with you to help

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daily tasks, tasks as washing dishes, buying groceries, and many more.

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person will learn how to take care of itself and gain more responsibility.

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, it is possible to see the benefit

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being in a new culture because that

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individual can learn more about the world and ways to see it, new perspectives, as well as learning new hobbies, sports, cooking recipes, and much more.

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, he or she will be able to make new friends, friends from another part of the globe. Because of that,

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experiences

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can add a lot to someone's life. In conclusion, studying abroad has its challenges, being away from the people you know and dealing with another idiom can be

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generate great experiences and knowledge if one is able to deal with the setbacks of it.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

In schools and universities, girl tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Nowadays some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Personal experiences in leadership roles, facilitating changes, and mentoring others.