5.D. Some People believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning a country’s culture and experience, while others believe that it is better to travel with someone you know. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traveling
Suggestion
Travelling
is considered as one of the greatest ways to learn about different cultures and traditions around the world. Some people believe that it will be beneficial to
travel
with
someone
that to
travel
alone. Though there are some positive benefits of
travel
alone, I believe that travelling with
known person
Suggestion
a known person
or in a
group
is much more enjoyable. On the
on
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
hand, when
someone
travels alone, he can enjoy some benefits.
Firstly
, decision making process becomes faster, as a
tourist
taking all
decision
Suggestion
decisions
alone. There will be on one to provide
extra opinion
Suggestion
an extra opinion
extra opinions
to take
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
consideration.
For example
, when deciding which foods to eat, may be delayed because of taking an opinion of
someone
providing company in the trip.
Secondly
, socializing with local people becomes much easier when travels alone. To illustrate, when people
travel
in a
group
, there will be less scope to do something outside the
group
.
In contrast
,
travel
alone provides enough time to a
tourist
to mix with local people
to know
Suggestion
know
about cultures and traditions.
Traveling
Suggestion
Travelling
alone has some positive aspects for the tourists.
On the other hand
, in spite of having some positive impacts of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
alone, a
tourist
can avail more benefits when
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
in a
group
or with
someone
.
Firstly
, when a person travels with
someone
, he can enjoy the trip more.
This
is because, travelling in a
group
makes
overall cost
Suggestion
the overall cost
lower and provides opportunity to enjoy more with less cost.
Secondly
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
involves a burden of responsibilities, which can be equally shared among the teammates while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
in a
group
.
As a result
,
tourist
can get more freedom and time to socialize with locals.
Besides
, a
tourist
can be safe and feel more
secured
Suggestion
secure
while
travel
with a close person.
Therefore
, it is evident that
travel
with
someone
is more beneficial. To conclude,
although
there
has
Suggestion
have
some positive benefits of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
alone, a
tourist
can enjoy at fullest without concerning about security while
travel
Suggestion
travelling
with a
group
.
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