You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter • Describe the situation • Explain why you cannot continue at this time • Say what action you would like to take Write at least 150 words.

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Samuel, I have recently been promoted to a managerial role at my office. I just received

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good news

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morning, and I am currently moving my files to a bigger office in the same building. I have thoroughly enjoyed attending your

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but due to my new

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I will now have to work during the time which I normally attend your

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. I tried discussing with my boss to find a solution that still allows me

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your evening

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, but unfortunately, we couldn’t find one.

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, I still want to complete the course outline before the course is over. I am free on weekends and have ample time to devote to the course. I would like to arrange private afternoon

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on weekends at a venue of your choice. I will foot the bill for any extra expenses to make

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possible. I look forward to your response. Yours sincerely Dumebi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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