Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

Foods purchased in markets and supermarkets contain preservatives and
this
has been a major source of concern to humans because of its danger. In my opinion, the drawbacks
such
as the detrimental effect on one's health supersedes any benefit it poses. Admittedly, the basic advantage of using preservatives
such
as colours in
food
is to improve the appearance.
In other words
, without the using colour in
food
production, the products will not be presentable and appealing for consumption to the public.
Also
, another prime benefit of using chemicals is that it helps to improve the shelf
life
of the product. To put in another way, without additives there will be accelerated rate of spoilage of
food
materials,
hence
, resulting in the degradation of the
food
product.
For example
, after the UK government banned the use of chemical in 2016 there was a rapid degradation of
food
materials in the stores, and the manufacturers attributed
this
occurrence to the ban of the chemicals essential for preserving the raw materials.
Nevertheless
, despite the advantages above, I believe that humans face serious drawbacks from the use of these chemicals. One potentially dangerous problem is its detrimental effect on human health.
As a result
, consumption of these products leads to
life
threatening illnesses
such
as liver failure, cancer, asthma.
Consequently
, increasing death rate and shortening
life
span.
For example
, the reported use of "sniper" a product containing
permethrin
- a chemical that should not be used in
food
products in eradicating pests in beans in the city of Kano, there was a resultant increase in liver diseases, visits to the hospital following its consumption. In conclusion, despite the benefit of prolonged shelf
life
using chemicals confer, it's reported disadvantage voids any advantage. It is highly recommended that the government increases the availability of organic produce in order to improve quality of lives of the population.
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