Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

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My name is Arthicha Srisuchinnawong. I have just completed my bachelor's degree in robotics and automation engineering from Institute of FIeld

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the area of AI concerned with the practical use of robots

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(FIBO), King Mongkut's University of Technology Thonburi (KMUTT), Bangkok, Thailand. I am very interested in studying robotics and intelligent system program at UiO (start in August, 2020) and jointing ROBIN or RITMO

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group. I am writing here to inquire about my opportunity to participate in

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program and one of these

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teams as well as to discuss my possible

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projects. After I spend my time reading your previous publications, I can think of several

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opportunities that I might assist your

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team. I would appreciate if we can discuss about them and it would really help me to decide about my future study. Anyway, I am open to a variety of projects apart from the ones listed below. I have conducted a study on adaptive locomotion of a gecko robot (climbing robot) using a central pattern generator (CPG). It is extremely hard to select those parameters manually since the motor signals should be well designed unless it will slip and fall down the climbing surface. So, I think that using a CPG along with a compositional pattern-producing network (CPPN) and optimized those parameters with genetic algorithm [1] could deal with

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on a robot with sensory feedback [2] to overcome either external environment

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as different types of surfaces or internal changes [3]. According to [2,4], reality gap is the major problem in evolutionary robotics. I faced

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kind of problem when I was working on recognition of captured images using convolutional neural network (CNN) trained with synthetic images [5]. I do believe that we can apply some pre-processing technique that narrow the reality gap down and it sounds exciting to verify

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with evolutionary robotics. As far as I am concerned, another solution to the problem mentioned in (2.)

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to perform evolution and learning with different type of environment (stiffness, friction, etc.)

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the real world

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was inspired by [6]. According to [7], another trouble is that the initial population is poor (I understand that

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a low fitness score

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and lack of diversity). I think that

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of an advantage [6] (measuring fitness score with respect to average fitness scores calculating from previous generations). I

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would like to use an artificial hormone [8] to determine the mutation rate (similar to the way stress leads to mutation and cancer). Perhaps,

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might be a novel approach inspired by nature and

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, I would like to know more about studying at UiO. I wish to attend lectures and do

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simultaneously. Is

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possible?

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, as budget is one of my major concerns, I found that there is no tuition fees, only semester fees needed for international students. Is

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Is there any opportunities for a master student to get some funding (

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assistant, teaching assistant and scholarship)? For more information, I have attached my resume, transcript of record and statement of purpose.

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, thanks for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon!

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Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and wha actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Some people think that modern design for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. Advantage and disadvantage.

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their to the countryside do you agree or disagree.