Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of house hold energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of Solar energy?

In a present time all countries are becoming more and more modern and
use
to a various type of instruments or widening tools. On the earth in
short time many
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a short time, many
a short time many
are mineral matters petrol, diesel
,
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,
natural gas
,
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,
mineral oil
,
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,
coal etc
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coal, etc.
coal etc.
will be listing because that's proportion is limited and
uses
a person who makes use of a thing; someone who uses or employs something
users
are increasingly. So now many running of solar
energy
tools are becoming in
household
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the household
as like water heater, refrigerator
,
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,
solar cockroaches etc.
Moreover running
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Moreover, running
for solar
energy
tools is more and more
use
in
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of
house hold
a social unit living together
household
for many proportion to cooking
,
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,
cold of things
,
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,
heat of water, solar
energy
is never be missing band it's become to more and more I
sun
energy
.
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.
So now in place of mineral matters solar
source
uses are more increase. Not only India but
whole world
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the whole world use
use
of a
this
type of solar
energy
sources because it is not in limited
.
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.
But solar
energy
tools
benefits
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benefit
as well as that's many disadvantages. In many advantages like
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
very low rates than others
source
and
secondly
solar average is naturally so never in future will be lost.
Thirdly not
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Thirdly, not
to be do effect
in
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of
environmental pollution to
use
of solar
energy
.
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.
Other solar
energy
is decreased to a power bill so it's a big
benefits
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benefit
. So solar
energy
is most important for each house.
Although
each coin have to
two side
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the two sides
two sides
as well as solar
energy
have to many disadvantages as like
first
solar panels are very
expensive so
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expensive, so
middle class family
can not
can not
cannot
implant
this
,
second
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a second energy
the second energy
energy
of solar
convert
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converts
in power
energy
so it's
also
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
expensive
.
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.
Thirdly it
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Thirdly, it
a stoping space of huge and
every one
all people
everyone
have to not large space
.
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.
In many countries have all year of winters
do that's
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do, that's
place not becoming solar
system
.
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.
For
uses
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use
solar
source
hole time necessary to tempest and that a not possible in monsoon
.
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.
Solar
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The solar system
system
is very hard because protect of other garbage of
sun light
the rays of the sun
sunlight
put them on so that glass very hard
nai
expresses possibility
may
also
to expensive. In conclusion
,
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,
solar
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the solar system
system
is very useful in
house hold but
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the household, but
the household but
household but
a household but
it's many disadvantages as
well advantages
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well as advantages
.
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.
Other for solar
system
possible in
sun light
the rays of the sun
sunlight
or tempest
.
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.
So in
world many
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world, many
countries that which have not
sun
tempest so
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tempest, so
in
there
of them or themselves
their
place solar
source
and
system
is
also
waste.

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