who do the line graph The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.

who do the line graph The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.
The line graph depicts the rate of young British, who prefer eating vegetarian food spanning over the past
50 year
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period. Obviously, we can clearly see that in 1960, young people did not have quality. And
then
, in the
next
20 years, the number of modern
vegetarians
rose sharply in 1980 and reached its peak (more than 15%). After a gradual decline in the
next
10 years, the rate of abandonment of British teenagers from meat fluctuated between 1990 and 2000, around 6%. At
this
point,
this
ratio reached its lowest point in 1995, slightly below 5%. Since
then
, the number of younger who have changed their habits
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vegetarians
has been increasing moderately until now.
Furthermore
, these percentages are expected to tend to be slightly flat and
then
grow. In general, teen
vegetarians
tend to be discovered in 1960 and were very popular in 1980. Since
then
, the number of British
vegetarians
has fallen and cannot be restored to the previous maximum, but it is likely to rise.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vegetarians with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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