Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

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It is generally believed that there are certain drawbacks from the use of chemicals in the
preservation
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and
production
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of foods. In my opinion, while there are some benefits in doing
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, the dangers
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as its harmful effects when consumed cannot be ignored. Admittedly, there are some benefits of using chemicals to produce or preserve
food
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. One of
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is that it allows for a longer shelf life for the
food
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before consumption,
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, it reduces the ability for the
food
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to get spoil and allows for consumption at a later time and
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in turn will reduce wastage.
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, these chemicals prevent the breeding of microorganisms on
foods thereby
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foods, thereby
adding economic value to the
food
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.
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to that, the use of chemicals in
food
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production
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and
preservation
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helps to modify taste and give aesthetic addition to the
food
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.
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, despite these benefits, the negative effects of using chemicals
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in
food
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production
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and
preservation
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on consumers
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are
very alarming.
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, the toxicity of these chemicals can pose a lot of health threats
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,
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, it can lead to different kind of
diseases especially
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diseases, especially
botulism
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associated with
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poisoning and
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can lead to death because it may be very difficult to know the exact chemical that was used to preserve or produce the
food
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that was consumed.
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,
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Chemical
usage can affect the entire
wellbeing
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well being
of the consumer ranging from psychotic
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
to physical negative manifestations because of allergies.
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, an individual might be allergic to a particular type of preservative and might not be aware that it was used in the
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or
preservation
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of that
food
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,
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,
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will cause serious allergies. In conclusion,
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chemicals
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chemical
usage in
food
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production
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and
preservation
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can make the
food
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last
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longer, its drawbacks like the hazardous effect on
consumers which
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consumers, which
off course can lead to death cannot be ignored and
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is by far more important.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • Finally
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