Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people choose their jobs according to their
comfort
, while some choose according to salary. It is true that some people accept bad
situation
because of their
comfort
, while others think that it is better to improve
this
situation
. According to my viewpoint, I totally agree with
second
situation
.
Firstly
, there are many human beings who are working in a company with lower salaries and
also
not satisfied with their
job
because they are working in different departments in which they did not have interests.
For example
, there are many graduated students who find companies to work and fulfil their needs, whether their companies are provide satisfied position or not.
On the other hand
, there are many people who are happy with their unsatisfactory
job
because of their
comfort
and fixed salary.
For example
, there are many people who are working in the small organisation which they did not feel any pressure.
Secondly
, some people think that it is better to improve bad situations. There are many graduated students who find their jobs after graduation in different department because they find comfortable, but they have to find their
job
in the same department, so that they are happy with their position and performed very well.
For example
, a person who completed their graduation in the computer field and
also
find their
job
in the computer field, so they are fully satisfied with their
job
. To conclude, there are many people who believe that it is better to accept a bad
situation
because of their
comfort
, but according to my viewpoint, it is better to improve
such
things like find
job
in your own field so that you are fully satisfied and perform very well.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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