It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is claimed that the proportion of

aged

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age

aging

people will be more than young people in near future.Personally, I feel that it has a number of positive consequences.I am going to explain my reasons in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, In the

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place, it will be a

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

expansion

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the companies and society.

elderly

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Elderly

people are more experienced compared to

youngers

used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father

younger

.In

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case, there will be more practiced individuals in the

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

market

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market, thus

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, companies are

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enabled

to take advantage from their experience due to making more money. In the

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place, it can be useful for

government

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If

elders will be more than youngsters,

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government

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the government

wont

will not

won't

have to create much equipments for young individuals

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as schools or job opportunities.

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, governments will be capable of

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saving

the budget for more important works.

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, it will be has a negative

outcomes

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outcome

for society and people.

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, due to some statements if the proportion of

old

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older

people will get more than

jouveniles

of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people

juvenile

, companies and firms will

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face

with the shortage of young workforce.Young people have more power and faster than the elders so they are highly likely to increase

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the

income of their firms.

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, elders are

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needed

drugs and medical cares

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,

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government

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the government

requires to obtain

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necessity.So, it can cause huge charge for

state

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the state

to create hospitals or special places for aged people. .

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, in my way of thinking, the

government

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budget

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should spend

should be spent

on other vital things including building schools.Not only should it spend on building schools, but it

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is a good idea to spend it for

educational system

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the educational system

an educational system

to have well-trained children for

future

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the future

. In conclusion, due to both above mentioned perspectives, it seems to me that it is a harmful development to have elders more than

youngers

used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father

younger

.

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The lack

of young individuals in every country can

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have

negative drawbacks for that country

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of getting an old country.