Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

In recent times, children’s hobbies have sparked great debates about whether they should be

educational

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educated

or not.

Although

several people feel that non-educational activities waste children’s valuable learning

time

, I do believe that relaxation

also

plays an important role in child development. On one hand, some people want to encourage children to have educational free

time

activities so that they learn as much as possible during

this

time

.

This

is because of the fact that human’s brain develops significant during

this

period;

hence

, it is essential to learn before becoming an adult and losing

this

advantage.

For example

, a

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later

study found that regularly we learn at ages between 5 and 15 at least 3 times faster than at ages above 40.

However

, I do not agree with

this

statement since the children needed

time

to relax in order to keep focusing on those activities.

On the other hand

, relaxation is a key factor in children’s learning. A strong reason for

this

is that they can learn nothing when they do something for a long

time

. When they become stressed and bored, their engagements drop and

this

inhibits their performance.

For instance

, I loved watching movies after I read a book for a long

time

when I was a child as I cannot stay focused on the story if I continue doing it.

Therefore

, it is undeniable that children need to do other things rather than educational activity. In conclusion, even if

educational leisure

Accept comma addition

educational, leisure

activities are extremely important for children, it is impossible for them to keep doing those activities for a long

time

without another type of activities that make them feel relaxed.