Essay topics: In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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is seen that recently there are drastic changes in family life style.

now

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Now

in many countries it is seen that people in

cities

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the cities

prefer to live in small units rather

then

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than

living in a combine family

system

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opinion

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opinion, this

this

change has more disadvantages

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than

advantages.

this

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This

essay will explain

importance

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the importance

extended family

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the extended family system

system

with some personal examples. It is seen that living in a combine family has a strong effect on upbringing of children.

living

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Living

with elders helps to create a strong family relation.

children

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Children

watch their parents taking care of

grandparent

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a grandparent

grandparents

and it

create

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creates

a sense of responsibility and respect in children. I remember in my childhood while sharing my room with my grandmother created a sense of taking care and helping others in the time of need.

this

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This

quality helped me to choose medicine as my profession.

to a very great extent or degree

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strongly

favor

promote over another

favour

extended family

system

moreover

in addition

Moreover

, extended family

system

is a big help for working partners in certain times.

staying

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Staying

together creates a strong and connected family.

for

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For

example, when

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moved to

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

country after immigration,

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missed my sister in laws

alot

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a lot

because

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Because

there were

couple

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a couple

of times when my kids were sick and they had to stay at home, she took care of them.

to a very great extent or degree

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feel there are more advantages of living together in a strong family

system

similarly

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Similarly

, in an extended mothers can find more time for their children.

there

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There

is distribution of tasks which give more time to spend with growing children.

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this

busy life when both partners are working it is a significant benefit.

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is an important factor for developing good nation

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conclusion it

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conclusion, it

is nice to stay in

extended family

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an extended family system

the extended family system

system

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has more positive effects

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conjunction used in comparatives

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negative.

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1Word repetition
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40Grammar mistakes
 

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296 words

4.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Essay topics: In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Fully explain your ideas

The crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?

Write an essay discussing the significance of renewable energy and arguing for its pivotal role in addressing the environmental challenges our planet faces. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

In the future more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?j

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?