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Essay topics: In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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it
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It
 is seen that recently there are drastic changes in family life style.
now
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Now
 in many countries it is seen that people in
cities
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the cities
 prefer to live in small units rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 living in a combine family
system
.
in
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In
 my
opinion
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opinion, this
this
 change has more disadvantages
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 advantages.
this
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This
 essay will explain
importance
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the importance
 of
extended family
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the extended family system
system
 with some personal examples. It is seen that living in a combine family has a strong effect on upbringing of children.
living
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Living
 with elders helps to create a strong family relation.
children
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Children
 watch their parents taking care of
grandparent
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a grandparent
grandparents
 and it
create
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creates
 a sense of responsibility and respect in children. I remember in my childhood while sharing my room with my grandmother created a sense of taking care and helping others in the time of need.
this
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This
 quality helped me to choose medicine as my profession.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 strongly
favor
promote over another
favour
 extended family
system
.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, extended family
system
 is a big help for working partners in certain times.
staying
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Staying
 together creates a strong and connected family.
for
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For
 example, when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 moved to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 country after immigration,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 missed my sister in laws
alot
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a lot
.
because
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Because
 there were
couple
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a couple
 of times when my kids were sick and they had to stay at home, she took care of them.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 feel there are more advantages of living together in a strong family
system
.
similarly
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Similarly
, in an extended mothers can find more time for their children.
there
Suggestion
There
 is distribution of tasks which give more time to spend with growing children.
in
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In
this
 busy life when both partners are working it is a significant benefit.
it
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It
 is an important factor for developing good nation
.
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.
in
Suggestion
In
conclusion it
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conclusion, it
 is nice to stay in
extended family
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an extended family system
the extended family system
system
.
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.
it
Suggestion
It
 has more positive effects
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 negative.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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