Essay topics: In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
it
is seen that recently there are drastic changes in family life style. Suggestion
It
now
in many countries it is seen that people in Suggestion
Now
cities
prefer to live in small units rather Suggestion
the cities
Linking Words
then
living in a combine family conjunction used in comparatives
than
system
. Use synonyms
in
my Suggestion
In
opinion
Accept comma addition
opinion, this
this
change has more disadvantages Linking Words
Linking Words
then
advantages. conjunction used in comparatives
than
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this
essay will explain Suggestion
This
importance
of Suggestion
the importance
extended family
Suggestion
the extended family system
system
with some personal examples.
It is seen that living in a combine family has a strong effect on upbringing of children. Use synonyms
living
with elders helps to create a strong family relation. Suggestion
Living
children
watch their parents taking care of Suggestion
Children
grandparent
and it Suggestion
a grandparent
grandparents
create
a sense of responsibility and respect in children. I remember in my childhood while sharing my room with my grandmother created a sense of taking care and helping others in the time of need. Suggestion
creates
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this
quality helped me to choose medicine as my profession. Suggestion
This
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
i
strongly refers to the speaker or writer
I
favor
extended family promote over another
favour
system
.
Use synonyms
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moreover
, extended family in addition
Moreover
system
is a big help for working partners in certain times. Use synonyms
staying
together creates a strong and connected family. Suggestion
Staying
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for
example, when Suggestion
For
i
moved to refers to the speaker or writer
I
other
country after immigration, any of various alternatives; some other
another
i
missed my sister in laws refers to the speaker or writer
I
alot
. Suggestion
a lot
because
there were Suggestion
Because
couple
of times when my kids were sick and they had to stay at home, she took care of them. Suggestion
a couple
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
i
feel there are more advantages of living together in a strong family refers to the speaker or writer
I
system
.
Use synonyms
Linking Words
similarly
, in an extended mothers can find more time for their children. Suggestion
Similarly
there
is distribution of tasks which give more time to spend with growing children. Suggestion
There
in
Suggestion
In
this
busy life when both partners are working it is a significant benefit. Linking Words
it
is an important factor for developing good nationSuggestion
It
.
Accept space
.
in
Suggestion
In
conclusion it
is nice to stay in Accept comma addition
conclusion, it
extended family
Suggestion
an extended family system
the extended family system
system
Use synonyms
.
Accept space
.
it
has more positive effects Suggestion
It
Linking Words
then
negative.conjunction used in comparatives
than
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