Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different Organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The world consists of wide varieties of people with different mentalities. So, their choices regarding their careers
also differs
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also differ
. Some professionals prefer being in the same Organisation throughout their working lives. Whereas, others prefer changing their jobs with time. Both decisions have their own advantages and disadvantages. It depends on the priorities, which
one
sets
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set
in
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
life. The category of people who choose to not change the Organisation will develop better networks within comparatively.
Moreover
, they gain the trust of the Company, which in turn, help them to be
in
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on
the priority list for most of the thing.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, those people who prefer changing their jobs frequently give the reflections of unreliability.
In addition
to it, they are not able to form that much good network at their workplace because of
short term interaction
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the short term interaction
. Organisational trust is questionable for
such
candidates. Sometimes, changing jobs from time to time helps in gaining vast areas of knowledge and it goes
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
with economical benefits
also
as there are so many companies who are ready to pay enough for outstanding skills and knowledge. But, if
one
is staying in a same Organisation throughout the
life
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life, then
then
economical growth is limited
relatively
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relative
. Of course,
one
can climb the ladder with a very high
pace but
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pace, but
that is
not the general case. In my view, it is better to stay in the same Organisation as
one
can gain clean and clear knowledge about the Organisation. They come in front in the list of most trustworthy candidates with good contacts in markets on which Organisations rely. Economical benefits can be achieved in
this
case too together with other benefits mentioned above, if the person is performing
outstanding
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outstandingly
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Longevity
  • Corporate ladder
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Professional network
  • Diverse skill set
  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
  • Resilience
  • Seniority
  • Job market
  • Career trajectory
  • Company culture
  • Professional growth
  • Job security
  • Promotion prospects
  • Cross-functional experience
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